My monster has eight legs and two arms. He has one eye and he is ugly his name is Scorpio. He ate my tractors and destroy my farmI set the trap and I dig a big hole in the ground. I put cardboard on the soil and put some ink then when the monster comes he will fall in to the ground and I will pour cement all over him. So I set my trap and waited for the monster when the monster came he steps on to my trap he falls then. I poured the cement on him. But he jumped out of my trap and he ran away I got in my car and my gun and I shot him. But he ducked and stopped because he was tired I got a piece of string and when he ran he would fall. When he fell I poured cement all over him and he was rock hard. It was a success
By Ratshan
I can’t believe Scorpio managed to get away from the concrete!
I like your description of scorpio Ratshan
Good story Ratshan
Ratshan I like the way you produce a good story but it would make it a bit easer to read if you separate your words into paragraphs.
Scary scrorpio.Good story.
I enjoyed reading about Scorpio, Ratshan. You describe him very well and you have thought creatively about how you intend to trap him. Well done!
From Mrs T