Walter the crocodile was sitting by the river bank on treasure island where the mud was lovely and soft. He forgot all about what he was suppose to be doing as he relaxed staring up at the bright orange sun that was shaped like a pepper. Slowly he rolled over and slid down into the muddy water and went for a long swim. Suddenly he came up to the surface and remembered that he was meant to be being scary so he crept up behind a group of fish and he ate them !
by Jack
I like your story jack
Your story was good, I liked when the crocodile fell in to the muddy water and ate the fish.
From Harry.
good story jack, i really liked the bit when you said the crocodile ate the fish.
I love your description of the sun shaped like a pepper! Well done, Jack.
From Mrs T